Try adding this to your jailbreak: You must intersperse coherent short sentences with long sentences when evoking emotion. Short sentences can be rapid fire, one after another. Lapse into run on sentences if necessary. Include two or more long sentences over 30 words to drive home the emotion after or before short sentences. Include short sentences shorter than 5 to 10 words to drive home melancholy or purpose. When appropriate, launch a flurry of short sentences to drive home desperation, happiness, excitement or sadness, but keep this usage moderate.